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Namyh
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0 posted 2019-11-11 03:44 PM


God’s Fingerprint

On the Sistine, Michaelangelo painted God’s fingered thrust
giving with Love the gift of Life to Man fresh from dust.
First breath, beneath the Heavens! Second breath, on land and sea!
From then ‘til now, a thrusted finger sculpts his Destiny.

Not long ago, Instinct was his primal need and guide
when smells repelled, fires frightened and lightning made him hide
and stars up in the Heaven were just punctures in the night
while reflections in the water were the ghosts he could not fight.

Then Lightning struck and all beasts ran. He made a mental leap
to stand his ground in Thunder’s roar, a choice to “not” retreat.
And Nature merged with Instinct to define Creation’s goal
from God’s thrusted fingerprint now stamped upon his Soul.

And if Time’s compressed into a day for beasts, for Man and flowers,
then Life with many a cell showed up in just the last twelve hours.
And Dinosaurs walked on Earth last hour! Pre-Man, a minute or so!
Modern Man, you and I only just got here less than a second ago.

Still time to learn from Wisdom! Still time to shed the Fears
of pain and War mourned by moms who’ve cried a billion tears.
Embrace the Life that’s precious. Be proud you’re Man from dust
and fashioned by the hand of God in a single fingered thrust!

Namyh



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RC Frazier
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1 posted 2019-11-11 08:47 PM


Yes!
augustsky
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2 posted 2019-11-12 07:30 AM


Namyh, Your mind moves in Wonderful ways,
this was special Poet!

Sky~

Autumn..
The Golden Hush
Before Winter~

Michael
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3 posted 2019-11-12 09:09 AM


Oh Namyh, you stir the soul with your words this morning.  Deeply moving an beautiful piece.  So many wonder-filled things in nature ...and as you bring out, within man show this fingerprint. Sometimes I still need a reminder to see it, though.  Thank you for giving me one.
Namyh
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4 posted 2019-11-12 03:17 PM


RC Frazier - After making us from dust, breathing in life and leaving His mark, maybe God was pointing to the future thus providing direction for a newly formed Man to begin his one small step for Mankind. I liked writing this and I’m so glad you enjoyed this too RC. I hope it helps when most needed and thanks for droppin’ in a spell to leave your fingerprint of "Yes". Namyh
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2019-11-12 06:39 PM


Namyh,

Namaste, I bow to the divine in you! ~L

Namyh
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6 posted 2019-11-14 11:44 AM


Ahhh Sky - Perhaps the ultimate illusion is for us to think we’re stumbling when maybe we are evolving by learning what trips us up. We seem to learn best when we screw up and make mistakes, no doubt a required component of human progress that helps define a straight line by knowing what a crooked one looks like. I’ll keep the flow flowing right out of my mind and hopefully into yours and vice versa. Thanks for your Fingerprint Sky. Namyh
Namyh
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7 posted 2019-11-14 11:56 AM


Lori - I've often been called a devil. Your recognition of the angelic within makes me definitely hear the fluttering of wings and I don't want them to stop. Thanks Lori for your slice of Heaven. Namyh
Starmcneil 1955
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8 posted 2020-07-26 03:17 PM


Oh my gosh...this is so perfect...how well I could see the vision of your words...God walks with us all
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