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Looking Back
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Looking Back |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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I'm desperate to look back and hear the words I used to know. Fear, no, sadness... not quite that; those words are strangers now. Letters, then lines, then feelings described and defined and defended these names that before here meant I was lost in the waves... but then there was blue. I miss you. -*-*- |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Brief to the point nice write. Inspired-8 |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Missing someone can be the hardest thing ever. Well done. ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
yeah, well, the future is where those words lay now, my friend. enjoyed, j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Fear, no, sadness... not quite that; those words are strangers now." When it comes down to that all you can do is convince you are better off without her. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Nicely penned...I think we all have moments when we look back and miss the way things used to be. I think that can be a good thing, as long as we don't keep looking backward and forget to live in the now and make new memories  Thank you for sharing ~ Alana |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* we all know the pain of loss..maybe she will hear your cry...well written |
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