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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2019-11-02 04:25 AM


1 November 2019

Meet me at the rainbow
and join me in our dreams
a world more real than solid earth
and heaven-kissed, it seems.

Look deep into my eyes
as I do into yours
and put your arms around me
as the fire in our hearts roars

and rages with our passion
as the world fades out of sight
in our own dreamworld for us alone
we visit every night -

we want to be together,
so every day as well.
We’ve been, it seems, forever
charmed by each other’s spell.

© Copyright 2019 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-11-02 06:31 AM


Owl,
This is warm and inspiring. ~L

Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
2 posted 2019-11-02 09:48 AM


Oh, my! Beautiful does not do justice to this masterpiece, Lady Di! sigh...
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2019-11-02 11:37 AM


Thanks, Lori.
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2019-11-02 11:43 AM


Even your replies melt me, John.  Sigh . . . Thank you for this exquisite, touching response and all those lovely compliments.  
RC Frazier
Junior Member
Posts 19
Colorado
5 posted 2019-11-11 08:42 PM


Sigh!  The romantics lament...I’m there, completely, with your poet’s soul!
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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ON
6 posted 2019-11-12 12:23 PM


very nice and dreamy OwlSA much liked

parker

*** the old black rum's got a hold on me... Great Big Sea.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2019-11-25 09:20 AM


Thank you very much, RC Frazier, for your kind words.
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2019-11-25 09:20 AM


Thank you very much for your kind words, Parker.
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