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Open Poetry #50

Everywonder

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2019-10-24 10:43 PM

Let's live together everyweather
In dovegloved love, in fields of flight;
Let's be the birds of Heaven's feather
And pierce with spiritual towers the height.
Let's live the calling everywonder,
With one life steal an eon's thunder
And plunging in the sky's embrace
Transcend it to eternal grace.
To what else is God's invitation?
Nelsewards but upwards can we stretch,
A prey for Paradise to catch.
Where mountains of imagination
We lift on tongues as songs of bliss
And only cease t'appease a kiss.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2019-10-26 01:19 AM

Oh, I do like the imaginative use of language in this one!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2019-10-26 05:48 AM

Some fancy footwork in this one! Enjoyed the dance of words. ~L

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2019-10-26 01:17 PM

Quite uplifting in a very literal sense. Beautiful ending.

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

4 posted 2019-10-27 02:03 PM

Pilgrimage, Lori, Michael - Большое спасибо for taking the time to read and respond.

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