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Open Poetry #50
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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
0 posted 2019-09-29 08:45 AM


Paint me a colour that gives me a smile
Not the black or the white that I see everyday
Show me warm pictures that shine to remind
Of youth and of freedom that drifted away
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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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1 posted 2019-11-14 03:59 AM

Have read this many times and thought it due a poetic response.  Have come to realize I am not the poet that could do it justice however.  Still very much felt this one.
augustsky
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2 posted 2019-11-14 08:01 PM

Has a Light all its own..
Lovely Poet Rick.

Sky~

Autumn..
The Golden Hush
Before Winter~
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