Open Poetry #50 |
Statuary |
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Statuary If life played fair, what would despair Then have to offer me? Untallied woe amidst the glow Of sweet Serenity? So pure—so true, these things we knew, But gifts of circumstance. So strong—so bold, we damned the cold Of this world’s demon dance. But of these things, who pulls the strings That turn haves to have nots? To yield a day been ripped away From a dream as it rots. Fillet of soul, you die unwhole, Or wither in its wake. Shine unfulfilled on eyes distilled Of hope, tied to a stake. Where in the black of “can’t go back” ‘Just watch Time as it flies. Heart steeped in ache, await bough’s break Beneath the tree of sighs. The wretched course of due remorse But a twitch on the lips. A shake of head, lost to the dead Touch of my fingertips. Pilfered spirit, I still hear it, If but a faded mumble. Too broken now to even bow— Too defiant to crumble. In voiceless chance, this spectered dance Of solitude forsaken Slips to a brusque shadowing dusk, With no step ever taken. Callous, yet worn; ever been torn ‘The nightmare never ending. Pitch black in scale, night’s to assail— Price of a life pretending. Stalwart, aplomb—demeanor calm, Pay I witness, unshaken; In dream of death, holding my breath ‘This time I don’t awaken. Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (09-28-2019 09:52 PM).] |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Nice poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I watched her smile at you, Michael. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Michael...So much I could say about this masterpiece. The inner line rhymes the double stanza style you write in, The soft emotion of the whole poem just makes me feel like I'm living your dreams and pain. Truly a great poem. Will add it to my library proudly. Thanks for sharing...Paul Do you give lessons ??? LOL Where ever you get your words from is a special place you have ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Very Haunting Poet Michael.. "beneath the tree of sighs"..this lingers for me. Sky~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Michael, This was awfully good.~L |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are a master poet, Michael and will carry your gift forward. |
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