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Upon a Perfumed Sea
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Upon a Perfumed Sea |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
I don’t like to post too many things in a row but I just finished this and I want to get it out. Impatient me. ______________________________ Upon a Perfumed Sea When we touch there’s a galaxy of sensations that I’ve never known before it’s too much but in my heart of hearts I’ll always burn for more Beyond my wildest dreams you’ll see me floating serenely upon a perfumed sea When we speak clumsy words they obscure meaning like a fog rolling ashore I get weak but in my stirred up soul I’m getting ready to roar Beneath your sweet moon beams you’ll find me floating contentedly upon a perfumed sea A night sky heavy with rain and broken sleep into the creases of my furrowed brow you creep smoothing out the lines as you go darling you should have told me I needed you so if all is illusion I’ll not shatter this for the world living is sweet and easy in the eyes of the girl you love more than you love yourself here, take this, my dusty heart off the shelf Beyond my wildest dreams you’ll see me floating serenely upon a perfumed sea And beneath you sweet moon beams you’ll find me floating contentedly upon a perfumed sea Above a cologne sky it’s just the clouds, the stars and you and I love is given freely a glow so brilliant it had to be So you’ll see me floating so happily upon a perfumed sea "Just being alive, it can really hurt, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This made me smile inside. You captured the essence of love at its most intoxicating and there is no potion more powerful. Sail on! ~L |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
I agree you captured it and sounds like a nice voyage to make. |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
As long as you keep posting such as this, you should post as often as you want. We see the light of those who find the world has passed them by, too late to save a dream that's growing cold |
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David Young New Member Posts 8 |
To caress moonbeams rays of verse among the sea of words that ambrosial perfume soft touch called Poetry |
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RC Frazier Junior Member Posts 19 Colorado |
Beautiful, fragrant poem. I’m all absorbed! |
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