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Open Poetry #50

her declaration

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-04-04 12:55 PM

if you think of me,
with my yellow umbrella
and my black high steels,
With my leather skirt,
If you think of me
With my deep blue eyes
and my perfumed hands,
Please if you think of me,
Bring your colored dreams.

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

1 posted 2017-04-04 01:24 PM

quote:
if you think of me,
with my yellow umbrella
and my black high steels,
With my leather skirt,
If you think of me
With my deep blue eyes
and my perfumed hands

I wasn't...but I am now.

Alluring lines yann.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-04-04 01:47 PM

Ahhh . . . P.U beat me to it, but still wanted to say what a great flow of words you have in those 7 lines.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2017-04-05 03:53 PM

Thanks PU and Jerry for the kind and elogious comments

yann

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