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Beautiful Drifter
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Beautiful Drifter |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Beautiful Drifter~ He drifts on the outskirts of beautiful, part of it belonged to him, he'd helped build it, with the mighty hammer of his heart. Turned away from possibility, as her scent filled his imagination, perhaps he couldn't see past tomorrow, beyond the comfortable conformity, obligation stiffened his upper lip. He chose instead the familiar, the safe niche, where regret can pierce the soul. But she knows he loses himself in dreams, travels the fields and meadows gathering poems among the wildflowers, as he rolls in with the clouds, a touch of sky upon his tongue. ©Augustsky |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
This is simply beautiful, I think my favorite of yours thus far. Your talent shines and I wish I could write like this. I usually get too wordy.  Enjoyed, saving this. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Augustsky, a stunning read! Have a terrific day |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
augustsky...Really enjoyed this. I think a lot of us wannabe poets and dreamers can relate to this. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Quivering with sadness on so many levels, AugustSky. |
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