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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Spices or diamonds, her eyes intimidate me. O Slowness. Gentle slaves. Epices ou diamants, ses yeux m'intimident. O lenteurs. Gentils esclaves |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool Yann! "Gentle slaves"-love it! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry, I cannot come to terms with "O Slowness.Gentle slaves." ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry, but I am ubable to come to terms with, "O Slowness. Gentle slaves" ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
let you seek Jerry, I know you are an excellent poet….Just imagine yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely with Jerry on this one - "O Slowness.Gentle slaves." eludes me too. In fact I'm no idea what-so-ever. Enjoyed, though puzzled (couldn't find ref. to it on web either) . . . j |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i owe you that, this is about intimate, eyes are such a mirror, and slowness is a way to perform, i must confess this is a very personnal foul, you have to read this, like a succesion of free sentences, i try to help myself have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enchanting, yann. |
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bbynams Junior Member Posts 49 |
I like weird poetry like this. Enjoyed it! French is one of the languages I heard a lot, but can't speak a word of it myself. Very cool. |
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bbynams Junior Member Posts 49 |
I also think you should consider titling it "Curves" |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot bbynams, this is cool to read you, all your comments, as you can notice the site is very quiet, whatever i was happy to read you, thanks a lot yann |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The replies are as interesting as the poem, Yann. My first take was that of being enveloped in honey. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
~Yann~ One of the things I love about your poetry is that I can read it and if I don't fully understand your personal thoughts on the piece...I can interpret it with my own thoughts that apply to me. Huggerz Alana |
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