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augustsky
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0 posted 2019-02-05 05:47 PM




Velocity~

Come to me upon March gales,
I'll untangle
your lofty words from trees,
we'll discover the whoosh of desire
as it whips corners
and fills the windsocks of sunrise.

Such tousled humans, with tousled needs,
we create poems on kites
to release in ballyhoo flight,
we love in fierce gusts,
we inhale one another for a thousand days.

You bring Spring to my body,
pearly rains,
then Summer haze and smoke,
a splash of blackberries stain skin
as we roll
in a sweet justice
known only to lovers,
a cool breeze
blows approvingly,
caught in the rushes,
tiny brushes..
of kismet
whirr past us,
it's just a matter of velocity.



©Augustsky

[This message has been edited by augustsky (02-07-2019 10:33 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2019-02-05 07:02 PM


Sky!
This is wonderful!! So many great lines that paint fantastic images! Even the poem itself has velosity! Way to go! ~L

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2019-02-05 11:16 PM


augustsky...Soft,tender and ever so refreshing. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2019-02-05 11:44 PM


Gorgeous poetry, honest and truly breathtaking. Really loved this Sky girl.
soul drifter
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Colorado
4 posted 2019-02-10 01:10 PM


Outstanding, sweet and cool and breezily beautiful. Seems I always dig your writing

"Put your ear down close to your soul and listen hard" -Anne Sexton

augustsky
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5 posted 2019-02-12 07:34 PM


Thank you all..Lori, Paul, Blues, & Souls..
your thoughts to my work mean much.

(((Hugs)))
Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2019-02-16 08:39 PM


i really love the justice for lovers, nice to read you all along


yann


Namyh
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7 posted 2019-02-19 04:13 PM


Ahhhh Sky - You've captured sentiments most lovely with this. Very much enjoyed, now my viscosity has velocity. Namyh
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