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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-31 12:42 PM




It was a night caressed by warm Southern breezes,
whose fingers were eager to do just what pleases
the waters were tranquil and calm

The stars shone so brightly,
yet touched my eyes lightly,
the moonbeams danced in sarongs

Their "ballroom" was grand
and each grain of sand,
reflected great crystalline splendor

Huge columns of stone,
stood all alone,
what they've seen no man can remember

But, for their uses,
I found no excuses,
when searching my soul for content

Till she can be free,
and she comes back to me,
it's all memories that I have spent...

        


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-01-31 05:07 AM


Well Bluesy,
I'd say all the memories you have spent were a good investment toward the future. You two should have no problem making wonderful new ones. Not to mention all those mundane day to day just livin' life ones. I'm so happy for you two that this very long road is coming to an end and you are about to embark on a new journey together. Godspeed my friend. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-31 05:20 AM


I greatly appreciate you, Miss Lori.

Be ever so well and happy!

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
3 posted 2019-02-02 12:25 PM



Here's to making lots of new memories and letting past stay where it belongs in the past ~ Much happiness to you both my friend

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2019-02-16 08:26 PM


splendid poem, really enjoyable read
yann



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