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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-26 01:30 AM



In a dusty room I cupped
your shoulder blade
and rested my thumb
in the crevice of your spine

Your lazy look I took
as an invitation to a kiss...

In an empty cinema I gripped
your reluctant thigh
and pushed my face
into your hair

Your whispered yes I thought
a sanction for my love...

In a dewy garden I placed
a purple amaranth
upon your breast
and wiped away a tear

Your soft, easy smile
showed the yielding of your heart...

On a warm autumn hill
I slid an emerald ring
onto your finger
as I knelt upon the grass

You gazed at our straining kites
and said one word...



    



...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-01-26 05:15 AM


Bluesy,
You write no words sweeter than those for your Linny love. Your dreams of love have no limitation of imagination. How do you love her? Just watch you count the endless ways. It is a joy to behold. Can not begin to tell you what a delight it has been to get to know you and thus getting a sense of what Linny has in store for herself. It is easy to see you make her smile. Life may have blessed you with little else other than that of an extraordinary love. But blessed you are and forever blessed may you be. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-27 01:53 AM


You warmed my heart, Miss Lori, not more than you know...

But just as much as you do know.

Thank you, doll...Thank you ever so much!     

...just bein' Bluesy

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