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Namyh
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0 posted 2019-01-09 05:20 PM


The Glimpse

Would you take the grand step ‘cross the sky
to stars whose sparkles beckon
and sever the umbilical cord of gravity,
be awed by planetary majesty,
embrace God’s endless silvern tapestry
and escape Earth’s pull each second?

Then step on soil of a distant star,
first footprint at Heaven’s gate.
For centuries, you pointed to journey there
to catch that glimpse of God so rare.
Now your arrow, man made of tensiled gear,
is a star leaping Ark of Faith.

And tho’ you’re a faint echo of a tiny whisper
in the thunder of Time called Man;
a trembling leaf on an outstretched branch,
a blade of grass on dry land,
a corner patch on some crazy quilt
where good and evil reign.
But greatest wonder, your relentless search
to jump the stars in a single lurch,
to sit on God’s cosmic perch
and view the Earth again!

Namyh


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augustsky
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1 posted 2019-01-09 05:37 PM


Absolutely WONDEROUS Namyh!

Left stars in my eyes, Loved it

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-09 08:15 PM


quote:
"you’re a faint echo of a tiny whisper
in the thunder of Time...
How seemingly insignificant we are without acknowledging a creator.

(My apologies for striking the quote out of context)

Contemplative, Namyh, and thought-provoking.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2019-01-10 05:34 AM


Love your perspective and I couldn't agree more. This was heavenly! ~L
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4 posted 2019-01-10 10:50 PM


Namyh...Your words paint a beautiful picture that someday will welcome you and others.
Enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2019-01-11 04:05 PM


When you get into the nitty-gritty of yourself, my friend, we all benefit!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2019-01-12 06:46 PM


A wonderful picture you have painted. Much enjoyed Namyh
Alana

Namyh
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7 posted 2019-01-13 02:25 PM


Ahhh Shucks Sky. Now you put stars in my eyes with your words. Namyh
Namyh
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8 posted 2019-01-13 02:42 PM


Bluesy - They say the Earth is about 4500 million years old or 4.5 billion. That's a whole lotta years. Of the 4500, we've been here for  7 and that makes us a "faint echo of a tiny whisper in this thunder of Time". We are just a speck of dust in a vast immensity. Thanks for stopping by to enjoy. Namyh
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