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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2019-01-08 03:50 AM



Her electrical impulses emitted to attract,
with a pheromonal scent that allured
Feeling an urge to converge and incitement to act,
My volition diminished, to be sure

An addictive impediment to my rational thoughts
came an intoxicating loss of control
A realization that the connection I sought
intertwined as two halves of a whole

My reward for the love and affection I’ve given
may compare with something divine
A feeling of entering a terrestrial bliss,
this celestial feeling of mine...




...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2019-01-08 04:20 AM


Bluesy,
Got a "charge" out of this one! I "currently" feel it is "heavenly"! ~L

LeeJ
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2 posted 2019-01-08 09:45 AM


lovely, gave me a smile for a nice start of today...


Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2019-01-08 05:58 PM


Bluesy...You are on a roll. Short, sweet and Damn good...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2019-01-08 08:19 PM


That's just one of the many reasons I like you, Miss Lori...
You've got your "polarity" fixed and flowing in the right direction,
and you're a very well "grounded" individual.

In other words...I think you're swell!
(That's an archaic term for "Awesome!)  


...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2019-01-09 01:15 AM


LeeJ,
I couldn't ask for more...keep those smiles comin'!  

Many thanks!  


...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2019-01-09 01:17 AM


Hey there, Paul!

So many thanks, pal!   

...just bein' Bluesy

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