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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2019-01-03 11:39 PM


I long to feel you
lying here beside me
yet just to sleep,
no other aim in sight

I only wish to watch you
while you're sleeping,
a silent vigil keeping...
against the many nameless
shadows of the night

I want to kiss your skin
before you waken
To brush your lips
with mine before you rise
For never could I rest, until I knew...
that the world intends no ills or harm to you
until your new-day smile again adorns my eyes

Soon now, my love...

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2019-01-04 03:45 AM


What a special love you have! I think even angels might be envious. What pleasure you wish for yourself is always bound to what joy you wish for her. You two deserve the best! ~L
jwesley
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2 posted 2019-01-04 11:16 AM


Wonderful expression of what love is meant to be, my friend.

j.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2019-01-04 01:43 PM


You're just so darn sweet, Miss Lori!
Thank you so much for your kindness and thoughtfulness.

Oh, by the way, doll, I've been meaning to ask you...Have you ever considered polygamy as an exit strategy?

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2019-01-04 01:45 PM


Thanks so much for the read and your comment, j'. You're appreciated.

...just bein' Bluesy

augustsky
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5 posted 2019-01-04 11:03 PM


Loving..Romantic..with a little bit of sexy
for good measure.

Wonderfully said Bluesy

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2019-01-05 01:27 AM


Thanks for the read and your kind comment, Miss Sky.
You're appreciated.

...just bein' Bluesy

suthern
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7 posted 2019-01-06 08:30 PM


Absolutely beautiful. I love this loving anticipation!
Poet In Pink
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8 posted 2019-01-06 11:01 PM


Hello Bluesy ~ So nice to read from your pen again. A truly tender and touching romantic write ~ Much enjoyed the read.  Hope all has been well with you
Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
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9 posted 2019-01-06 11:28 PM


Many thanks, Ruth! Such a nice comment.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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10 posted 2019-01-06 11:32 PM


My dear Miss Pinky! So nice to see you too!

I'd be ever so pleased to read you again...make it soon!

...just bein' Bluesy

Larry C
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11 posted 2019-01-08 01:07 AM


Well now... that just needs to happen. I like the intimacy felt in this piece. Nicely done.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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12 posted 2019-01-08 03:13 AM


Many thanks, Larry!

I trust all is well with you and the family.

My best wishes...   

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
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13 posted 2019-01-08 09:46 AM


heartfelt write...lovely
Paul Wilson
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14 posted 2019-01-08 05:54 PM


Bluesy...Smooth as silk my friend and refreshing as a cool breeze on a hot Summer  night. Thanks for sharing this with us...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Bluesy Socrateaser
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15 posted 2019-01-08 08:05 PM


Thanks, LeeJ...

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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16 posted 2019-01-08 08:08 PM


Thank you, Paul, for the very nice compliment.
You're an asset to the board and I, for one, appreciate each and every one of your replies!

...just bein' Bluesy

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