Open Poetry #50 |
A Tea With Bea As She Sat On My Knee; Who'd Believe We Were Watching TV...? |
Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Like a rubber band coiling around my fingers, you give me something trivial to dwell upon ...for a sweet five seconds or so Yes, I feel the warmth of your innocence and your tamed, serendipitous smile I also saw the sexy, alluring playfulness ...of your cocky grin Pour me some green tea please, baby so I can see the tensions on your face as they slowly fade away just by simply being in this moment... ...just bein' Bluesy [This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (01-08-2019 07:59 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
A lot to be said for living in the moment-it's a great gig if you can get it. As for fading tensions, be it by green tea or green eggs and ham, I'm all about it. ~L |
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Clare Ite Member Posts 66 Where The Pallet Pins Play |
Not at all what I expected. The name was a poem all by itself. We are all in the moment, dear Bluesy. What more can there be? I always have time for you... |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Cool write, I imagine hot cocoa over green-tea, but that's just me. 'in the moment' is a wonderful premise. Enjoyed.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bluesy...I try to read between the lines of some poems when the meaning isn't obvious this is one of those times. Laugh if you will but I read this as you and your grand daughter having a tea party while she sits on your knee and she has you wrapped around her little finger like a rubber band...Paul My crazy imagination ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You know I'm always pleased to see you, Miss Lori. Many thanks... ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
How very sweet of you, Miss Clarey. Thank you so much! (Glad you liked the 'opener') ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Being from the land of "snow-ghosts", I reckon you would prefer 'hot cocoa' over tea, especially 'ice tea'. 'preciate the visit, Miss Sky... ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:You've gotten everything 'spot-on', Paul, my friend...except she's wasn't my granddaughter! Thanks so much for reading into this, Paul! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bluesy...I guess I will have to wonder about that unless you care to elaborate...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
We were all teens at one time...and you know how teens exaggerate! Thanks as always, Paul. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My mom used to wear a rubber band around her wrist to remind her she had to do something...lol ah hem, sorry to change the subject, anyway Lovely this....just sounded like a warm fitted glove, so comfy... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Swing it any way you choose, LeeJ. Just nice to hear from you. I appreciate all your visits. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Bluesy for taking me there to the moment ~ There is never anything else that can quite compare to them when they are as sweet as that one. Pssst...I don't think you were watching tv at all! lol |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I firmly believe that this moment in time calls for 101 proof Jack Daniels Whiskey . . . You bet! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:Nothing I like more than a "Peeping Pinky"! Forget that "right at the light" stuff! I'm catching the next flight out!! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:Wow! That's a major move from 'cheap California Burgundy', Jerry! Ha-ha-ha! "Salute...!" ...just bein' Bluesy |
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