Open Poetry #50 |
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Slipping Off The Hook: Going For A Spin At The Local Compass Rose... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror ![]() |
It was a damp and dreary Tuesday in the evening at the bar The tavern’s door was open when she entered like a star She asked for a ‘Cubra Libre’ as she brushed my arm aside My nostrils flared from perfume as she turned to me and sighed Her hair was thick and flaxen her eyes deep almond brown Her lips were full and painted with a curve as if to frown Soon my gaze was recognized and she asked what was my thought Her beauty, I said, was stunning and could it well be bought? She smiled and said, “all things, my friend, are always best when shared… and when it comes to lovin’ me, two souls will then be bared” She finished her drink and smiled at me then turned with grace to leave...saying, “And when next you fall in love, my friend… perhaps you’ll think of me” ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
oh Bluesy, looks like she told you...she could not be bought, so there in the lesson taught... ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Pure, unadulterated fiction, my 'Niles-ish' friend... ![]() Thanks as always for the read, Miss Lori. ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sure, Sure, anything you say to save face. I understand. ![]() ![]() |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I should know better than to try and pull the wool over you, Miss Lori. Okay, you called me and I'll wimp out and fold...BUT!! I'm not leaving until I tell it like it was! Listen: quote:...and dat's da tooth! ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
I came I read I shook My head I chuckled Hee Hee Your antics funny |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
I came I read I shook My head I chuckled Hee Hee Your antics Funny! I guess the second post was just in case you missed the first one! Ha Ha |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I almost relived your poem from my past . . . Eh . . . Not a fat chance . . . My success with the ladies of the taverns were even more unsuccessful than hitting on church ladies. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Aww! Miss Pinky! Seconds with you? ![]() You came I fled My face Turned red! You bring out the 'shy-guy' in me... ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Hmm..."Church ladies", eh? Now, why didn't I think of that? Thanks, Jerry! I'll be waitin' to hear about this! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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