Open Poetry #50 |
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In The Beginning: Genesis 1; Writing The Book Of Love... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror ![]() |
I confess I was smitten by a girl in my class I loved her long flowing hair...every strand My heart was played by love’s relentless, crushing pass It was a time when love was fresh and new to me Turning every single waking thought...to her, and liberating inside me, what it was to be I always thought you were the prettiest girl and my infatuation for you, Linny, has never diminished My love turned true and my heart was set a whirl In Dallas, on my cheek our first kiss you laid, the lightness of your lips ever-lingering in me...like a breath I feel it still, knowing its warmth will never fade An ember in my heart was set ablaze that through many years was held from public view You know you still make me spin with cupid’s craze Now, I sow and mow easing every creeping sun, unwinding and replacing fate’s thin threads, to spin a skein where we can at last, be as one That I’ve hurt those near and dear would be untrue, but their tangled woven webs I soon unwound, and ‘til time stops, my love, know this...I do love you ...just bein' Bluesy [This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (01-07-2019 09:56 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweeter words were never written by anyone so love smitten. If your love turned to honey all the bees would just pack it up and go home, for there would be no competition. It is almost a sin to let us look in upon your hallowed ground and witness the sacred love you've found. But if we are wise, we will look with our hearts and not our eyes to see the lessons your love does behold. And better to our own loves be, without being told. May your days continue to be filled with the abundance of each other's grace. And blessed be the future you embrace. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
...and to think you told me that "sweeter words were never written", Miss Lori. Here, let me show you how wrong you can be: quote:...you see? You've warmed my heart just as much as you believe you have, Miss Lori. From my side? Greatly! Bless you and your loving heart... ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Blusey...A tender side of you I never read before. Feels so good to tell someone how you feel I bet. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Bluesy - They say if you look for Love, you won’t see it. If you listen for Love, you won’t hear it. And if you reach for Love, you won’t touch it, But if there is a Genesis of thought, it's the one that says "I know you're out there and I'm waiting". Most enjoyed Bluesy. Namyh |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Sounds like a wonderful beginning for sure ~ With a start like that you can be assured it will just get better ![]() Alana |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Hiya, Paul! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your visit! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Wise words tucked into a very much appreciated visit, Namyh! Thanks a lot! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Loved hearing from you, Miss Pinky! Sometimes...I think 'pink' ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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