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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2018-12-30 09:32 AM



It is awesome to be awesome
at  sixty-one.
I didn’t understand
at  fifty-nine,
that everyone is awesome
in their own way.
That awesome isn’t relative
to anyone else's.
It is entirely unique to you.
Often your awesome
is hard to see,
it takes others to remind you.
Then you remember how awesome
awesome feels.
It doesn’t require perfection
on your part,
just honest effort
and good will.
There is no pretending,
only the youest
you will do.
Being and feeling awesome,
invites gratitude
to an Awesome even greater.
It gave me the realization
that it is an awesome blessing  
to be awesome at sixty-one.
Every blessing I recognize,
every kindness that I give,
is what makes me awesome.
I know I can’t be perfect,
I know I can’t do everything right,
but I know that I am awesome.
And by God,
at sixty-one,
I know that is just alright.

LGR(C)12/30/18


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2018-12-30 12:26 PM


Eh . . . Lori, I feel and understand each and every word of this . . .er . . . Awesome poem. I'm seventy-nine and let me tell you, my friend, THAT is awesome!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2018-12-30 03:00 PM


Thanks Jerry, glad you could relate.The concept of being awesome is relatively new to me and I slip back into sixty years of thinking something else.  Thank God for reminders!~L
augustsky
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3 posted 2018-12-30 11:04 PM



Why..Yes You are Poet Lori!
I barely know you but I feel I could trust
you with anything..without any judgement,
you seem to me.. to be the Real deal.
Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

Cheers to your Awesomeness L.!!!
Enjoyed..
Sky~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2018-12-31 06:06 AM


Sky,
What a great compliment! Thank you so much. You know I really admire you as well so it makes your words twice as sweet! {{hugs}} ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2018-12-31 12:05 PM


"Sixty-one" is merely an inversion of "Sweet 16". Though unattainable, I've always thought of you as "Sweet 16", Miss Lori.

In other words...this!  

Not this...!  


So sue me!        


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2018-12-31 04:43 PM


Well I must say I appreciate the thought! Sue you? Nah, you just got a promotion! How awesome of you to recognize that under my fluffy and behind the gray and wrinkles, beats the heart of a sassy young thing in a mini-skirt. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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7 posted 2019-01-02 12:04 PM




Happy New Year Doll...!

...just bein' Bluesy

augustsky
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8 posted 2019-01-02 01:54 AM



Ok,..I'm a little slow & Late lol..but HAPPY  BELATED  BIRTHDAY  LORI!!!!
Hope it was Fun, Memorable, & AWESOME!!!

(((BIG-B-DAY-HUGS)))

& Happy New-Year..

Sky~

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2019-01-02 09:16 PM


I think I will stop going to the stockpile of my work to post. You are the only one who allow's the world know that I have done so. So I shall stop. Thank you for being so attentive.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2019-01-03 07:33 AM


I have no idea what that even means Jerry.
You can choose to post what you want for what ever reason you want. I don't know what on earth I could have said to you that would influence what you choose to post. But if it is that important to you to let everyone know they are missing out on select pieces of your "Stockpile" because of me, so be it.
What are you going to do if I say the "wrong thing" about a piece from your new pile, quit posting altogether? C'mon man. If you are going to act like that, I don't need to comment at all. ~L

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