Open Poetry #50 |
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Immortal Star |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Immortal Star In the twinkling twilight glitter that reflects from off your car are my glints from ‘cross a billion miles of far off distant stars. Your learned say we stars have died and yet our light still keeps to race across the gaps of galaxies light-years love to leap. When we explode, blasting forth the elements in our light, we feed the newborn stars in stellar cribs who nurse thru night on gold and silver, nickel and copper, mercury, carbon and zinc to grow an Earth that grew a man who’s now our future link. Most million years we lived and laughed to dance galactic Space as orbs of light which in your eyes were blinks of spectral grace and as we dim to be no more, our light stays pure and just when in the mirror you reflect the stardust made of us. From death comes life, a natural law that governs even stars who send light ‘cross a billion miles to land upon your car and tell you true that you are Man, a legacy made of we who waited for you to carry within our immortality. Namyh [This message has been edited by Namyh (12-31-2018 10:27 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Simultaneously macrocosmic and microsmicm and parcelling humour, fantasy, eternal truths, sorrow, joy and beauty all in the same wrapping paper – that is some feat, Namyh! My favourite lines are: we feed the newborn stars in stellar cribs who nurse thru night and the whole of the 3rd stanza though I love the whole poem. ![]() |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Owl - Look at it this way. If we take all Life on Earth and compress it into a day, then the first many-celled organisms started up about twelve hours ago. The Dinosaurs last walked the planet about an hour ago. Pre-Man showed up about a minute ago and Modern Man, you and I, got here less than a second ago. It took over 4 billion years to reach that second. As a species, we're just babies made of stardust. We still cry for milk, occasionally we need a change of pampers and we often deserve a good spanking whether we like it or not. What poet could resist writing about that. Thanks for enjoying O. Namyh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, no words, just reading this lovely peace makes one feel immortal...life is never ending... |
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