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Dark Thirty
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Dark Thirty |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Dark Thirty~ Adrift in these lonely hours curled fetal for warmth, minutes dawdle slowly, a sherpa coverlet gives much needed comfort in a cold December bedroom. Thoughts torment while body tries to escape into sleep, bitter wind shoves the night, and in the distance a faraway dream motions the way to solace. Adrift in these lonely hours curled fetal for warmth, minutes dawdle slowly.. without you.. (c)augustsky |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Another thoroughly lovely piece from you, tremendous stuff. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah, like your style, my friend - similar to my own, though thank goodness for you it's different - but wonderful and enjoyable for sure. Phrase 'Dark Thirty' worked well for both you and Lori. j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sky, Bless your heart for digging this one out. I was excited to see the title and the read did not let me down. You have a sensitive touch with sadness that gives depth without drama. You precisely pinpointed a familiar ache and brought it to life. ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you much Souldrifter, hopefully you'll post one of yours soon. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Well J...my friend, similar styles..I consider that a fine compliment. Thank you Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
L. You say the Kindest things, Thank you. This was an oldie, thanks to you that phrase jogged my memory. Hugs.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I can feel it, sky, as if you were sleeping in the Rockies, what an exquisite read yann |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
No..not in the rockies.  This is an oldie,but I remember that cold desolate feeling. Thanks Yann.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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