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Open Poetry #50
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
0 posted 2018-12-16 09:59 PM

Umbrellas dance in Manhattan,
red and green like the clouds
Never seen that still
I kissed you in the A train,
Red and green like your lips
When I met you in Manhattan.
© Copyright 2018 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
EvaRoss
Junior Member
Posts 22
1 posted 2018-12-17 01:47 PM

Rain, train, romance
Very nice in the tones of red and green
I enjoyed
EvaRoss
augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2018-12-17 06:27 PM

Yann, Refreshing & Romantic piece,
creates a cool image in my mind.


Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2018-12-17 11:23 PM

Love the opening line! Great piece all over, my friend!

j.
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