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Open Poetry #50

Get Right With You

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2018-12-17 12:37 PM

Get Right With You

Kiss the light
and blindness stabs back
empty bed tonight
hits me like a heart attack

I could cry for love
or I could die in the shadow
of a dream I can't get enough of
wading through hope but it's shallow

Ooh feel like I could just stand here forever
wishing upon a clue
yeah how I could just stand here and never
get right with you
sugar darling
now there's nothing that I wouldn't do
to get right with you
ooh

Kiss the dark
feeling my way out
wherever you are
save me from this wounded doubt

I could die for love
or I could thrive in the shadow
of a dream I can’t get enough of
this feeling cuts to the marrow

Ooh feel like I could just stand here forever
wishing upon a clue
yeah how I could just stand here and never
get right with you
honey child
now there's nothing that I wouldn't do
to get right with you
ooh

Yeah I said I could just stand here forever
wishing upon a clue
oh how I could just stand here and never
get right with you
baby sweet
now there's nothing that I wouldn't do
to get right with you
yeah

Kiss the light
and blindness stabs back
here in this bed tonight
love hit me
c’mon hit me
love please hit me
just like a heart attack

“All is fair in love and songwriting” - Norah Jones

ptime
Member
Posts 64

1 posted 2018-12-17 02:45 AM

heart breaking as of loss of a loved one. clearly and descriptive is your pain and loved the repeat on your poetry that complemented your work.

I feel your pain in this excellent poetry.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

2 posted 2018-12-17 06:35 PM

"Kiss the dark
feeling my way out
wherever you are
save me from this wounded doubt"

Love that stanza (& enjoyed the rest too)
"Get Right With You"..plays in nicely also.
Your writing seems to flow Naturally into lyrics.

Well done Souldrifter..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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