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This Delicate Thing We Have
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This Delicate Thing We Have |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Her lips like petals from a fragrant rose. Whether we have come together Rightly, or wrongly, We are here, She in her world, I in mine, Together At night when slumber calls, I lose myself, We have constructed a world Independent of kith or kin. Our world is as unlimited, As our thoughts can carry us, Infinity stretches beyond our desires, We have boundless possibilities, To let our passions grow. I have deep, deep feelings for you, Some would call that love, I’ll not argue the fine points. November 15, 2018 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Jerrypat, Hold on to any bit of Sweetness you can find in this life, that's what I believe anyway. Enjoyed the read.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Had to take a sweet nap after I got up at six. Thank you, Sky!. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for your input, Sky, and I know you are absolutely right. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, the ending made me smile....enjoyed. sometimes, the closeness of a female can be more rewarding then an intimate relationship...I've had that friendship with a male, a lifelong friend...the rewards are many....but sometimes we cross over that line, mistaking that friendship for what it isn't or can never be, and you lose that valuable friendship. [This message has been edited by LeeJ (12-06-2018 07:47 AM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Couldn't have said it any better, my friend, and I agree with you completely. A friend, in depth, is a wonderful thing, no matter who it may be. It's a special thing. Great piece! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . How right you are, Lee J concerning the relationship between a man and a woman without finalizing it with sex. And I am here to tell you it was FANtastic! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Jimmy, I so love you taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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