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Open Poetry #50
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
0 posted 2018-11-25 07:02 PM


Chitty city,
it is my town,
cause everyone cheats everyone,
And  I must flee, every Saturday
Chitty city, in my car,
that flees faster than me.
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Clare Ite
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Posts 66
Where The Pallet Pins Play
1 posted 2018-12-18 03:44 AM

Makes me want to go "Chitty-Chitty-Bang-Bang!"
I enjoyed your poetry, dear yann.

I always have time for you...
ptime
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Posts 64
2 posted 2018-12-18 05:58 AM

nice plaay with words. did question is there a deeper point to the rhyme of chitty city. I suppose that is for the reader.  fun read and enjoyable.
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2018-12-26 05:18 PM

Had to look twice to actually see the C vs S . . . Cutely done, but quite serious in total.

enjoyed

j.
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