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andrew rosindell remix sensible borough names gets my queen light
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ptime Member Posts 64 |
andrew rosindell remix sensible borough names gets my queen light 09.11.18 loving the news reading booming and swell got a feeling poetry not needing will get a snub from mr rosindell. the suggestions will linger most will get a slam sub highgate already did finger my silver is called village wham. just before is royal the second queen maybe envious and green to the city of west-minister will be loyal going to rename it city queen. hammersmith will get a alter along with ealing lets join them into one water we are calling them seven seas of rhye to add feeling. harrow and barnet and enfield need assistance to the reader i want to entertain these three are now called piece de resistance barking is like me and renamed close to pleasure pain. london will go green death on two legs to the mission welcome to uk queen rest of world is one vision. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
okay,granted I'm missing a lot of your references and the subtleties of your slang... so its like a foreign language to me... but it has a nice flow and I get the drift. I think it is good, but I'm still clueless, trying to be encouraging. ~L |
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ptime Member Posts 64 |
thank you for reading and trying to understand. this was inspired from reading this in a paper I picked up traveling through London. http://camdennewjournal.com/article/london-boroughs-need-to-go-back-to-sensible-names-says-tory-mp real big queen fan so added a bit of spin to make the news interesting. hope that makes more sense now and you see my inspiration. thanks again for reading. |
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ptime Member Posts 64 |
if you can not see the queen songs in the poetry then I will loose "patience" and be very "headlong". |
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ptime Member Posts 64 |
opppps the patience is a bit of the crop. love the wham to. |
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