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ptime
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0 posted 2018-11-09 06:47 AM



andrew rosindell remix sensible borough names gets my queen light 09.11.18

loving the news reading
booming and swell
got a feeling poetry not needing
will get a snub from mr rosindell.
the suggestions will linger
most will get a slam
sub highgate already did finger
my silver is called village wham.
just before is royal
the second queen maybe envious and green
to the city of west-minister will be loyal
going to rename it city queen.
hammersmith will get a alter
along with ealing
lets join them into one water
we are calling them seven seas of rhye to add feeling.
harrow and barnet and enfield need assistance
to the reader i want to entertain
these three are now called piece de resistance
barking is like me and renamed close to pleasure pain.
london will go green
death on two legs to the mission
welcome to uk queen
rest of world is one vision.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-11-10 04:59 AM


okay,granted I'm missing a lot of your references and the subtleties of your slang...
so its like a foreign language to me...
but it has a nice flow and I get the drift.
I think it is good, but I'm still clueless, trying to be encouraging. ~L

ptime
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2 posted 2018-11-11 05:09 AM


thank you for reading and trying to understand. this was inspired from reading this in a paper I picked up traveling through London. http://camdennewjournal.com/article/london-boroughs-need-to-go-back-to-sensible-names-says-tory-mp

real big queen fan so added a bit of spin to make the news interesting.  hope that makes more sense now and you see my inspiration. thanks again for reading.

ptime
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3 posted 2018-11-11 05:11 AM


if you can not see the queen songs in the poetry then I will loose "patience" and be very "headlong".
ptime
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4 posted 2018-11-11 05:12 AM


opppps the patience is a bit of the crop. love the wham to.
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