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jwesley
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2018-10-24 03:16 PM


Surrender

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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 2018-10-25 08:18 AM


Been there, done that... bought a closet full of tshirts. *sigh*

Beautiful depiction of a wretched situation.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2018-10-25 08:15 PM


like so many men, wesley, but one is enough to repair all that, thanks for sharing


yann

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2018-11-04 06:50 PM


Nice way to replay an old song.
Great balance -- words and picture!
Perfect.

JL


jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2018-11-05 11:00 PM


Thank you my friends for reading and replying . . . and, of course, for liking.

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2019-01-03 11:00 AM


Short and Sweet and FANtastic!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2019-01-03 12:27 PM


the only thing I can think of is "surrender to the night".  LOL

the Phantom.....


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