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Shortysdadd Junior Member
since 2011-06-26
Posts 39 |
Death, you jackal You have forgotten my heart and the arms that grasp it. They are of no use to me |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i feel legitimate anger in your poem, appreciate my reading yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Short powerful write! Anger, grief and love right in your face! ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sorry my friend . . . have visited this one several times and it, for some reason, doesn't jell with me. I can't quite get a grip on it's import. . . . wanted you to know I read it though. j. |
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Shortysdadd Junior Member
since 2011-06-26
Posts 39 |
Hey thank you all for the feed back I appreciate it. Thank you J. Wesley. You keep me on my toes. This one may have been rushed a bit I appreciate you reading it. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
A very poignant write...It leaves the reader to explore their own interpretation. Enjoyed my read ~ Alana |
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