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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-08-26 06:09 AM




It is fascinating to observe
the way my memory works
with the holding on and letting go.
I’ve been through things
I never would have imagined
that have left blanks spaces
I have no desire to refill.
While at the same time it seems
some dramas are forever
like it was only yesterday.
Names now escape me
like marbles from a bag.
It is not just people,
but things and places as well,
that draw a blank.
I can feel the words on a wheel
spinning inside of my head
that can’t remember to stop
on the right places or faces.
I know I’m at that age
where one’s head begins
to act like a sieve.
So now I’m just grateful
I can remember my name
and where I live.

LGR(C)8/26/18



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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2018-08-28 08:55 PM


thanks lori, time has no mercy, it is the same for everyone, i love the precision and emotion of your feelings ; this is such a beautiful write  


yann

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2 posted 2018-08-28 10:19 PM


Lori...Touching write. My wife is going thru the same thing and I have to watch it get worse every day and feel so helpless cause I can't do anything to stop it. Bless you my friend...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

LeeJ
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3 posted 2018-08-29 12:26 PM


A friend of mine is going thru this....Lori, I hope you never have to worry about finding your way home....hugs

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2018-08-30 04:50 AM


Thank you Yann,
what a wonderful thing to say! I appreciate it so much! ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2018-08-30 04:57 AM


Paul,
My Mom has dementia and her sister died of Alzheimer's, so it is always on the back of my mind. I have seen how hard it is on the spouses. Hugs ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2018-08-30 05:01 AM


LeeJ,
Me too, but odds aren't in my favor. With my lack of a sense of direction getting lost has always been a concern too. ~L

jwesley
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7 posted 2018-09-03 11:40 PM


Yeah! Feel your pain . . . I think I have more empty spaces than spaces . . . people always have to give me some latitude in conversations while my pauses and searches my brain, and rooms have even given up giving me hints to satisfy my reason for entering them.  Thankfully I still pretty well remember what I went to the bathroom for . . . could go on and one, just like you could, but so far, still find my way home from anywhere (although I need to think about where I'm going . . .) and on and on...

loved this, makes me feel better knowing you're afflicted also!!

j.


JerryPat2
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8 posted 2018-09-04 12:51 PM


I suppose most everyone has a bone to pick when the advancing years heaps terrible things upon us. Many times when I pass someone on the street or wherever He/She will not meet my eyes. It is then I begin to think they think I am an old man. Then I have to stop and think, I AM and old man!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2018-09-06 02:41 AM


This is something most of the population will have to face. You have penned it perfectly ~ Keep smiling dear friend   When I think of getting old and forgetful I just remind myself of all the new people and adventures I will have  Ha Ha  
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