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We Move As One
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We Move As One |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
We Move As One We move as one through the confetti and afterglow how do lovers always know the right steps to make We move as one eyes are locked, half open and dewy words are useless tonight baby oh this love we make We move we improve as we go along the heart drum in perfect rhythm we're writing our own song and it will go on yes it will go on We move as one two drops in vast the ocean of night do lovers always see the light the right path to take We move we improve as we go along the heart drum in perfect rhythm we're writing our own song and it will go on it will go on We move as one through the confetti and afterglow how do lovers always know the right steps to make "Some men see things as they are, and ask why. I dream of things that never were, and ask why not"--RFK |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool! What a beautiful love song. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"we're writing our own song" Yes. Yes. YES! I love this phrase, as I love the absolute great poem of intimacy. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great piece, my friend . . . definitely gets the feeling out. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
We move we improve as we go along this is so true, excellent read yann |
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