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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2018-07-26 09:03 PM



Conquistador, I want to win your heart,
cursed celestial body
I want to possess your revolt,
and all that we predict,
Conquistador I want to force to kneel down your eyes,
curious tigers I want to share your imagination, with the gods Conquistador,
I want to enter your citadel,
I want to climb all your hills, to enjoy on them,
I also want to abolish the chance,
and the stolen jewels, As Mallarmé,
Conquistador, I want all South America,
I want the sun of your throat,
and the wise latitudes,
I want the treasure of your silences,
Conquistador I want to belong to you,
I want to throw weapons
And only to believe in this falling star
that freeze me as a kiss,
The only truth of the moment.

© Copyright 2018 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2018-07-26 09:18 PM


Last line did it for me. I understand this, you wrote it perfectly.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2018-07-27 08:47 PM


thanks Jerry, all the images of the poem are very true and sincere
Poet In Pink
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MI
3 posted 2018-08-15 07:01 PM


As always enjoyed the wonderful journey Yann   You always lay out so much to think about ~ Most enjoyed
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2018-08-15 07:49 PM


Thanks PIp, your comment is  so nice and meaningful

have a  nice day


yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2018-08-15 07:50 PM


Thanks PIp, your comment is  so nice and meaningful

have a  nice day


yann

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