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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Thunder crashes overhead, Shadows casting from the corners I couldn’t hold it in. Haven’t I tried, Hard enough? Looking around me, All the chaos falling To pieces on the floor Haven’t I cried, Long enough? Spinning hands, Broken clock Time just stands still Why is it not, Fast enough Silence, breaks me Chains me up, But I am halfway out the door |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You go girl! I really like the power behind these words. You are almost there. Keep going and don't forget to slam the door behind you. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh . . . I cannot think of words to comment on after reading Lori's comments! But I am 100% percent behind her. Never stop. Keep on keep on keeping on! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kellie...Beautifully written. I will be waiting for the final stanza, where you keep walking out that door, never looking back only forward to a better life...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello kellie, i hope you will push this door, and break the tantalizing silence, I agree with all comments, this is a powerful poem and beautiful yann |
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Clare Ite Member Posts 66 Where The Pallet Pins Play |
Life is a series of doors, dear Kellie. The last one closes on you. I always have time for you... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really, really enjoyed this, my friend, especially the last stanza. j. |
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