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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2018-06-09 08:15 PM




Now Baby


I'd like to kiss you
but then I'd probably miss you
on some future occasion
as you walked away
with my heart still attached to yours
like an umbilical cord
hooked to a new born baby
and keeping us together;
perhaps I should cut the cord
and move on to the next part of my life
before you  bring out the sissors,
honey I loved you with all my heart
but it seems you only wanted
a little piece of my heart
and it is up to me
to figure out what I will
do with the rest.

JamesLee
6/9/18


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2islander2
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1 posted 2018-06-11 10:33 AM


beautiful poem, dull of emotions
2islander2
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2 posted 2018-06-16 07:44 PM


ooppps, sorry james, it was "full" of emotions, naturally


yann

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3 posted 2018-06-18 01:37 AM



A very heart~touching write James. Your words depict the ups and downs of a relationship to a tee. It hurts when love is not given back as deeply as we ourselves love...Enjoyed reading as always

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4 posted 2018-07-04 06:04 AM


its not easy when the heart is involved
to give it all

penned from the heart
enjoyed the read
hugs

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