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Open Poetry #50

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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-05-02 08:18 AM

Do not speak to the cat of your loves,
He would laugh,
A sprig of lily-of-the-valley hangs on the window,
Undecided.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-05-02 07:16 PM

Yann,
I have read this several times and the more I do the more I like it. It makes sense to me in a very disjointed yet syncopated way. Like Jazz makes sense. cool ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-05-02 07:35 PM

I agree.

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2018-05-03 10:27 AM

Thanks LOri, the comment is like a lovely jazz song that touched me,

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2018-05-03 10:28 AM

Thanks bluesy

yann

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2018-05-07 09:03 PM

Yeah, me too, my friend. But then, I don't speak to cats at all . . .lol

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2018-05-09 10:57 AM

thanks jwesley , i guess you do for the best, nice to read you

yann

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