The Dark Veil Rises: Falling Again In The Fall Of The Year...

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Open Poetry #50

The Dark Veil Rises: Falling Again In The Fall Of The Year...

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-30 01:04 AM

I long to feel you
lying here beside me
yet just to sleep,
no other aim in sight

I only wish to watch you
while you're sleeping,
a silent vigil keeping...
against the many nameless
shadows of the night

I want to kiss your skin
before you waken
To brush your lips
with mine before you rise
For never could I rest, until I knew...
that the world intends no ills or harm to you
until your new-day smile again adorns my eyes

Soon now, my love...

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-30 04:21 AM

Bluesy,
this one here is so special it brought a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes. I don't know but what that isn't every woman's dream to have her man feel that way about her. I can only begin to imagine the hope, light and love you send her. You are a special man to do this and she is obviously a special woman. With all my heart, I wish the very best for both of you.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-04-30 09:37 AM

To allow your woman the peace of mind, which invariably turns to sleep is special. And you are content to merely watch her, awaiting for morning before you brush her lips with yours is an amazing feat of pure love.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-04-30 12:48 PM

You're so very kind and understanding, Miss Lori.

My love and I thank you.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-30 12:51 PM

Thank you, Jerry.
Your comments are always greatly appreciated. I know they come from a lifetime of experience.

Much obliged, Sir!

...just bein' Bluesy

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