Lubrication In The Digital Age: From Strap Hinges To Piano Hinges...

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Open Poetry #50

Lubrication In The Digital Age: From Strap Hinges To Piano Hinges...

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-05-01 06:18 PM

Let’s be more of lovers and not so much companions
as we fend off all our doubts from these outer gardens

Let’s not be burdened with expectations or regret
I know how much will be left south of the gate

Swinging it back and forth my darling,
serves to remind me of how diligently I’ve oiled its hinges

Give me your hand, My Sweet Baby
Let’s you and I take ourselves an old-fashioned walk

We can talk about nothing
...and laugh at the newness of each other

Whaddya say, Toots?

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2018-05-01 06:26 PM

Hah! Absolutely love your first two lines, the rest ain't bad either, especially the last one Let's all let loose and forage ahead with a jaunty step.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-05-01 07:24 PM

Thanks for your spirited reply, Jerry.

Got me laughin' some! Thanks again!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2018-05-02 04:23 AM

what a great poem! What a great invitation to look forward to. You are a bottomless well of sweet water words. ~L

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