Watching And Waiting: It’s The Hoping That Makes This House A Home...

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Open Poetry #50

Watching And Waiting: It’s The Hoping That Makes This House A Home...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-28 07:12 PM

It was a night caressed by warm summer breezes
whose fingers were eager to do just what pleases
The waters were tranquil and calm

The stars shone so brightly
yet touched my eyes lightly
Moonbeams danced in sarongs

Their ballroom was grand
and each grain of sand
reflected great crystalline splendor

But for their uses
I found no excuses
when searching my soul for content

'Til she can be free
and comes home to me
it's just memories which I have spent

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-28 07:46 PM

I love this. It is so sweet, it is a favorite of mine.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-04-28 08:18 PM

You put the words together perfectly, Blusey. Its the waiting that drives us berserk, don't ya know. When we're together all that waiting seems not what it was. We're together now, everything is good.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-04-29 02:11 PM

Thanks, Miss Lori! So glad you like it!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-29 02:12 PM

Thanks, Jerry. What you say is true.

...just bein' Bluesy

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