The Case For Flatulent Foreboding: A Bonanza Of Brain Farting...

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The Case For Flatulent Foreboding: A Bonanza Of Brain Farting...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2018-04-27 12:04 PM

A void in thinking
Sensing loss of certainty
Without assurance

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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1 posted 2018-04-27 02:56 PM

Three brilliant lines in this very expressive senryu.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-27-2018 06:08 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2018-04-27 06:00 PM

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2018-04-28 12:17 PM

Thanks for looking into this, Jerry.

I appreciate your comments very much.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-04-28 12:19 PM

Is there a 'Bronx cheer' that goes with the extrusion of that light bulb, my dear?

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2018-04-28 02:27 PM

No not at all, as with any kind of flatulence, the fog eventually clears and we can either think or breathe again.

Speaking of flatulence, Winston's SBD's (silent but deadly's) are something to behold.
They grab your face and twist your nose before you even know what hit you. You ever have that problem with your dogs?

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2018-04-29 02:08 PM

As pups, I fed them a lot of Mackerel, but now the monsters eat only dry food and they're as enthusiastic about it as ever!
Every once in a while my neighbor brings then some fresh fish from his catch, but other than that, they're heavy crunchers who love their 'free range' existence.

So, no, I've not been a victim of "foul play".

...just bein' Bluesy

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