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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2018-04-28 02:18 PM


Die A Slow Death
Laurie - you're not alone my friend, I wear the same shoes... jimmy

Breakfast –
uh-mmm, where’s my double sausage and biscuit?

Lunch –
you want me to eat what??

Dinner -
. . . aw, you know who you are
and how it goes,
meal after snack after meal.
Crave this, must eat that –
don’t touch me,
don’t talk to me,
I don’t even want to smell you!

The doctor said, “you’re Type II Diabetic”,
Lose weight,
lower your cholesterol,
less salt,
less food,
Die A Slow Death!

Oh, and exercise!

So, back to the top.

Did that . . . and that –
lost weight,
got all the blood-thingys
under control.
Doctor was happy –
I was miserable,
then came Thanksgiving,
Wow! What a sacrifice!

But I did it!

Maintained all the blood-thingys!
Kept everything under control!

Almost . . . died.
Of envy, of want, of hunger –
I’m sorry, loads of water,
even the green-leafy kind
does absolutely nothing for –
S A T I S F A C T I O N!

But all my blood-thingys loved me
(Warm fuzzies all around).
They happily swam around in the
lack of need, desire, fulfillment, and,
and happiness.

All my blood-thingys loved me!

And then Christmas Holidays came –

I rebelled!I fought!
I lived!!!

My blood-thingys went nuts –
I went giddy, happy, warm all over,
in Love Again, with EATING!

New Year - Oops!
Starting from scratch is horrible.
All the ground gained, is gone.
All the indicators say –

I’m dying.
A slow death.
Miserable, craving, hungry, dissatisfied,

But all my blood-things love me. Sorta.
And my doctor . . .

Screw him!




© wesley james beard, jr.
An oldie, still relevant to me and . . . you?I'm still living by the last line!!!


© Copyright 2018 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2018-04-28 06:35 PM


Hah! I'm a Type II Diabetic also, J. Doctor ran down to me all the things I should and should not do. Except for losing some weight I did what I wanted to do. They said, don't eat this . . . I ate that. I have never dieted like they said I was supposed to, except for cutting back on how much I ate. Every time they checked me out they praised me for following their orders. (snicker) To this day I eat what I want. I drink alcohol drinks (wine) before I go to bed. I'm good to go.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-28-2018 07:07 PM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-04-28 06:55 PM


You've a system that works, Jerry.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2018-04-28 07:35 PM


I hear ya Jimmy. But I'm still listening to my Dr. because I don't wan't to stroke out eating a doughnut...er...ah...doughnuts.  
~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-04-28 07:40 PM


Jimmy?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2018-04-28 08:22 PM


Jerry? - Sorry, I was eating. . .

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2018-04-28 10:45 PM


It wasn't you, jwesley.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Paul Wilson
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711
United States
7 posted 2018-04-29 01:33 PM


Jimmy... Type II also. Did my best following my doctors orders for lots of years, then said to HELL with it I eat what I want and leave the rest up to the Lord above. Doing okay I guess, still living...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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