Languishing In The Legendary Love Of Lorelei...Sweet Siren Of The Sea

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Open Poetry #50

Languishing In The Legendary Love Of Lorelei...Sweet Siren Of The Sea

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-22 04:59 AM

Bubbling and spilling over a salt sea breath
she once made love to him in waves

As from a passing moon, she would ebb and flow
against his rough exterior

Cradling his sullen brow with the greatest of ease,
in ways only she knew how

Then, with a simple turn of her hand and a splash,
...she was gone

Gone...leaving only a kiss,
the last thing that he can still touch

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-22 05:26 AM

Cool one Bluesy! Really like this one! (too)
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-04-22 05:35 AM

Aww...Thanks. Miss Lori!

I just knew you like fish stories!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2018-04-22 09:35 AM

Mermaid fantasy perhaps? Never mind, this write is crammed with the proper thoughts of a lover which gives all she has to give, and then goes away leaving only memories.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-22 11:25 AM

Right you are, Jerry...on all counts!

Thanks so much!

...just bein' Bluesy

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