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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2018-04-14 03:00 PM


is it possible
even plausible
to finally run out of words

can your river of nouns and adverbs
etc
be staunched by unseen pressure
like a cataract
covering the brain
where I once was so full of life
words flowed
like tears from women
even though they were sometimes plebeian
I find myself these days
stalled at the door
of the next great novel
or poem, whatever
why
ah, that is the question
do I need diversion
a three-week drunk to restart my wordflow
maybe physical, sexual comfort
a woman
think it could be that simple
seat myself behind the wheel
of the Taurus
head west maybe
stopping along the way
at old boot-hill cemeteries
reading the weathered inscriptions
on the wooden tombstones
yes
I would like that
yes
get me out of the rut I seem to be in
see new people
different landscapes
where before I felt great hubris
I am now timorous to a fault
old age
has it finally settled around my bones
can it be curbed
or have I come to life's passage
where languor is the order of the day
and nights
ah
maybe, just maybe
I should not resist this
natural phenomenon
sit back
relax
it is merely nature taking its course
no!
I shan't surrender
to torpid interpretation
and the dulling of the senses
a trip westward
maybe
I'd like that
have to acquire a laptop
to record my journey
it is a germ of an idea
this westward trip

or is it possible
even plausible
to finally run out of words

©April 17, 2018 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-04-14 03:17 PM


quote:
"I shan't surrender
to torpid interpretation
and the dulling of the senses"
Bravo! I say! Bravo!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-04-14 04:19 PM


Thank you so much for your comments on my poem today, Bluesy. And yes! I shall fight this thing called old age. What I really hate to think about is next years birthday, I'll turn 80. Boggles the mind. How the hell did I manage to live this long? But I'll take turning 80 with a new start of fighting it. Eh, we all know, however, how it ends, but no sense lying down for it if you have the energy to fight it. Thanks again, Blsey.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2018-04-14 04:32 PM


80, eh? I've a ways to go if I ever make it to that plateau.

Many congratulations, Sir!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-04-14 04:49 PM


To be congratulated on turning 80, is somewhat a dubious pleasure. But I feel you heart was in the right place when you congratulated me, so I thank you wholeheartedly.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2018-04-14 10:03 PM


Words be damned . . . it's the spirit you have to keep alive. I'm still a kid, only gonna turn 75 next year - but I'm coming your way, my friend, words or no words . . .

enjoyed,

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2018-04-15 08:32 AM


Good day to you, j., and thank you for your kind thoughts about my poem this morning. You are correct, of course, about the spirit.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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