A Division Of Being: The Alteration Of an Overactive Ego...

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Open Poetry #50

A Division Of Being: The Alteration Of an Overactive Ego...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-14 02:03 PM

One capers through deserted car parks blessing the hidden moon
as he slips and slides, creeps and crawls barefoot between the city's empty spaces

Stalking through night-time forests seeking prey to tear with tooth and nail
Sluicing blood from matted hair disposed of in metro-monsoon storms

The other one cups desert sands in supple hands praising the seething sun
Watching the majestic eagle soaring above spying a serpent crawling below

Scaling mountain peaks, he stands with arms outstretched,
laughing at the whipping winds and screaming glory to the stars

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2018-04-14 02:46 PM

Oh hell yes . . . "screaming glory", glory, glory, glory at the top of his lungs. You did good with this one, but you always do good.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-04-14 03:18 PM

Thanks, Jerry!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2018-04-14 08:45 PM

Well Bluesy this is deeper and darker than where you usually go. You write like a box of chocolates-never know what you are going to get. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-14 10:17 PM

Don't blame the chocolates, Miss Lori...blame my "overactive ego".

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

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