Open Poetry #50 |
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A Division Of Being: The Alteration Of an Overactive Ego... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror ![]() |
One capers through deserted car parks blessing the hidden moon as he slips and slides, creeps and crawls barefoot between the city's empty spaces Stalking through night-time forests seeking prey to tear with tooth and nail Sluicing blood from matted hair disposed of in metro-monsoon storms The other one cups desert sands in supple hands praising the seething sun Watching the majestic eagle soaring above spying a serpent crawling below Scaling mountain peaks, he stands with arms outstretched, laughing at the whipping winds and screaming glory to the stars ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh hell yes . . . "screaming glory", glory, glory, glory at the top of his lungs. You did good with this one, but you always do good. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thanks, Jerry! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well Bluesy this is deeper and darker than where you usually go. You write like a box of chocolates-never know what you are going to get. ~L ![]() |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Don't blame the chocolates, Miss Lori...blame my "overactive ego". ![]() Many thanks! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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