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Open Poetry #49

Still Seeking Forever

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-11-15 11:25 PM

Still Seeking Forever

I have been to
the enchanted bamboo valley
in the forest
of the kung fu fighters,
seeking to gain a dose of
its mysterious powers
and I still treasure the story
of the Lady in White
and all her glory;
so do not think it strange
that I venture their again
hoping she will challenge
me to a fight
in hopes I will win,
for I could think of
few things better
then to live in forever
knowing all the pleasure
and the bliss
of her sweet
evening kiss.

JamesLee
11/15/16

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

1 posted 2016-11-16 02:56 AM

"The Lady in white" is indeed legendary in some corners of the Far East. I myself pursued her in the Philippines. You could hire a 'Jeepney' to take you just so far and no further where the 'famed dame' was said to wander. A classic apparition.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-11-16 09:03 AM

VERY good indeed, James. Perfectly written. Mysterious and slightly foreboding. I loved it!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2016-11-19 12:36 PM

I think you have to perfect that "Run through the Tree tops" skill first

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-11-22 11:31 PM

thank you Ari, Jerry and Rex for commenting...james

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