Open Poetry #49 |
On the Scent |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
alone at curbside table slash of tawdry-red lipstick parted, pouty mouth sensuous movie star superiority coffee vapor tendrils stroke her face as she sips sets demitasse down secretly smiles as men's eyes fondle her fedora brim shades her brow nylons swish cross of legs black-leather raincoat like skin stands, sniffs air, witch-like musky scent stimulates primitive man male pheromone her destiny ©November 20, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is a really good description of someone with a superiority complex. enjoyed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Rex, for your thoughts on my poetical attempt. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:I like the exotic when mixed with a pinch of the erotic and your woman has a good deal of both. Women are superior and any man worthy of his own sexuality knows this to be true. Your writing amazes me Jerry. Great piece (No pun intended). Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hello Ari. My thanks is genuine and I give them to you in appreciation for your serious comments. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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