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Xeonox
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0 posted 2016-11-10 11:40 AM



You were my path and my destination,
Without you, it is hard to live,
You are my God, and my blessing,
Without you, everything is cursed,
I am feeling the loneliness without you,
All of my aching and sadness,
Leads only to your absence,
You are my agony, and my pleasure,
My hurt, and my remedy,
This open wound on my heart,
This body of mine,
Is all yours as it as much of mine,
My sky is searching for your land,
My shortcomings are filled only by you,
Without finding you as my shore,
I am forever lost in the sea,
It is hard to go on without you here,
I understand that without you,
I need to find a way to survive,
But it is the most difficult task,
This journey is more beautiful,
Than reaching the destination,
My love is only half filled,
Without you to refill it.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-11-10 12:42 PM


Many fine sentiments in your poetry Xeonox.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2016-11-10 04:37 PM


nice...james
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