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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-11-06 06:55 AM


Now in these early mornings
of coffee and quiet,
I find myself alone
with thoughts
never before contemplated.
Fear has a new flavor
that makes me want to face it,
rather than cower in a corner.
My depression be damned,
there is no time for my dysfunction.
It is my turn to calm his apprehensions
about what the future will hold.
My strength depends on me to protect him
when he is at his most fragile.
My world depends on me to fuel him
through the fight of his life.
My heart is full and ready to answer
the call to action.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-11-06 08:44 AM


This is beautiful, my friend. But it is much more than beautiful. You are reaching down, pushing things aside which will hinder, not help, and taking sole possession of your pure grit and determination to see him through whatever will befall him. He is very lucky to have you there for him. I wistfully wish I had been as lucky as he is and could have found someone with true grit kind of love which you have. Much happiness to the both of you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2016-11-06 02:41 PM


I am finding the silver lining in this situation and feeling blessed for what I have. I'm not looking forward to the coming days but I am undaunted. Thanks for commenting. ~L
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