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jamesmcinerney
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0 posted 2016-11-06 07:31 AM


‘Black Butterfly’

I felt it all with you. The sorrow that never seemed to leave regardless of all the places I hid myself, knowing I would never belong. And yet I still hid. I endured the isolation. The memories that tore me apart, only to find that I was just as lost as when I was with you. Hammering on the invisible walls, my fists pounding the surface in the hope someone would save me from myself, that someone would notice that I still belonged, but no one ever did. So I stopped. I allowed the silence to cling to me in the way that I once held onto you, foolishly thinking it would last forever, only to realise my mistake.

- James McInerney
(Author of 'Bloom' & 'In between the lines'. 'Red' out 2017)

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2016-11-06 07:52 AM


It is not often that I reread a piece several times, especially when each reading makes me more aware of my discomfort in being able to relate. I let it take me to the edges of places I did not wish to go. Very well done. ~L
jamesmcinerney
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2 posted 2016-11-06 09:19 AM


Thankyou ever so much.
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