Open Poetry #49 |
Sip of Autumn |
rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Sip of Autumn~ Sip of cider between thoughts.. a Fall remembered upon cat-tails of hope, of trees hanging fire, a scarecrows wink at pumpkins bulging with delight. That wonderful feeling of leaves that burn forever, burn't offerings of life and smoky love. Hands in the pockets of his warm jacket, a harvest of sweet obscenities whispered at his back. come fly..let us fly with the grey geese as they depart through a chilly sky, one last cry to apple cider time. © Jan~ rainyj |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:A truly lovely "sip of autumn" Jan, but I must admit, this I quoted lead me to the most provocative of interpretations. Can you see me smiling when I say that? Should I be smiling,...sort of? Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh hell, Ari . . . Smile you devil, I'm thinking the same thoughts and I'm smiling broadly! Ah, Jan . . . This was a pure pleasure to read. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Pretty poetry from a pretty lady! I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I'm one of those that enjoys the scent of burning leaves, the taste of hard cider and fine poetry. You possess a gentle pen Miss Jan, very much in tune with that which surrounds you,. The good and the bad. Forgive my sounding like a fortune cookie. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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