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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-10-03 01:21 PM


Lakeland.
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Did you conspire with nature
to assemble this perfect night?
Entrapment by starlight
~
I hurry you through the rose garden
Fearful the clinging perfume
Would drown your sweetness
~
A moon burst of silver
Snatches my breath
Questions my non beliefs
~
You turn to me
I take your hand
Knowing I will never let you go.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-10-03 02:55 PM


THIS is a perfect poem of genuine love, whether made up or true, it stands alone with its grandeur.!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2016-10-07 05:46 PM


wonderful, beauty lead to love for sure


yann


rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA
3 posted 2016-10-08 03:46 PM


Cari, The Magic of Romance indeed,
a very lovely read Poet.

rainyj

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-10-08 10:09 PM


really nice...james
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